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arroz

Sun Apr 20, 2008, 3:32 PM
  • Mood: Content
I THOUGHT of your beauty, and this arrow,
Made out of a wild thought, is in my marrow.
There's no man may look upon her, no man,
As when newly grown to be a woman,
Tall and noble but with face and bosom
Delicate in colour as apple blossom.
This beauty's kinder, yet for a reason
I could weep that the old is out of season.

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:iconcharlemaine:
:wow:

:love:

nice.

kept reading it to myself over & over again

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:blackrose::kiss::blackrose::kiss::blackrose:
Taste the love
The Lucifer's magic that makes you numb
The passion and all of the pain are one
You're sleeping in the fire
:iconbadjokesandbuttons:
beautiful. especially the last line.
this really says something to me.

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"it's such an enormous thing, to walk and to listen."
:iconmum:
william butler yeats.

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From loves weak childish bows she lives uncharmed
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William butler Yeats.

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From loves weak childish bows she lives uncharmed
:iconbadjokesandbuttons:
oh really? i thought you wrote it at first. well anyway, i'd love to read more of your poetry.

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"it's such an enormous thing, to walk and to listen."
:iconcharlemaine:
You should credit him, otherwise some ppl might assume it's yours. we're not all well read yknow ;)

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:blackrose::kiss::blackrose::kiss::blackrose:
Taste the love
The Lucifer's magic that makes you numb
The passion and all of the pain are one
You're sleeping in the fire
:iconmum:
I havent liked anything so I havent posted much..

but I'd love to show you when I can.

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From loves weak childish bows she lives uncharmed

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